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She sat in silence, staring out
She wanted so much to scream and shout
But she just sat there, looking through
To the place that's foreign and new

So as they drove the landscape changed
Past the lights of the city lanes
Horses, cows and grass galore
Buildings and cars she wanted more

Her friends and family she longed for still
As she gazed out past the water mills
She listened to the sighing wind
While keeping her thoughts deep within

She sat in silence, staring out
She wanted so much to scream and shout
But she just sat there, looking through
To the place that's foreign and new

The sun was setting as they screeched to a stop
In front of a house surrounded by crop
She lifted her bags and went quietly in
To where her new memories had to begin
©2008-2009 ~marudot
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Author's Comments

This is my first poem (i'm not really into poetry) please tell me if you understand it!! it's supposed to be about a city girl being forced to move to the country side, but everyone that reads it thinks something different!! maybe this just isn't my thing.... :worry:

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:iconjawada:
I understand it....... I just wish you would actually post stories...

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please be 'cool' and check out my art :aww:
:iconlodf:
Poem!Poem!Poem!Poem!Poem!Poem!Poem!Poem!Poem!Poem!Poem!Poem!Poem!Poem!Poem!Poem!Poem!Poem!
Just to make you feel special I typed them all not copy pasted. This reminds me of you story with the girl from the past.

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In darkness I fight
without fear
without pause
I'll end you here
for my cause
:iconanyoneforthedark:
Oh my gosh! :wow:
I loved it! You are so talented! you and jawada are like opposite clones! because jawada is really talented in drawing and you are really talented in writing!
:iconanyoneforthedark:
wow you must type fast......
:iconlodf:
Computer apps helps a lot but I still four finger pick type. =)

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In darkness I fight
without fear
without pause
I'll end you here
for my cause
:iconanyoneforthedark:
maybe I should go into computer apps.....
:iconmarudot:
thank you very much!! :hug:

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love maru always
:iconmarudot:
i'm trying!! i'm trying!! i need to find some time!!

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love maru always
:iconmarudot:
that means a lot

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love maru always

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